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Pablo Báez's avatar

I like how you layered the first sentence, anaphora, chiasmus, epistrophe, alliteration, polysyndeton plus the imagery and symbolism.

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JLG Noga's avatar

Thank you. I'm going to pretend I planned any of that and didn't just go on a spree.

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ARC's avatar

good prose

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JLG Noga's avatar

The ARC arrives. Thank you

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ARC's avatar

okay, okay well played.

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Kiff Joshua's avatar

Aside from the writing, I love the work you do on the thumbnails

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JLG Noga's avatar

you're a real one Kiff

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