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Jimmy Doom's avatar

This is really well done. It’s good to see someone careening into the walls of the literary bounce house.

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JLG Noga's avatar

Much appreciated, Jimmy, means the world coming from you! I’ll try my best to keep the castle afloat before reducing it to bedlam.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Bedlam is good. I’d rather get puked on by chaos than massaged by monotony.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Yeah. That’s what life might start feeling like—a robotic set of motions, pointless. That’s when you need a change. But I guess your MC dug out the beauty in the monotony. :)

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JLG Noga's avatar

Some sort of beauty, that’s for sure lol. In the end, all we’re trying to do is not end up in that hole.

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