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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

This was awesome! I loved how you created a steady rhythm in the flow of the piece. Each sentence read like a steady march, carefully crafted to the point where I could add a beat to it and it would flow perfectly. Really cool!

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JLG Noga's avatar

Thank you so much Bradley! I did it in under an hour and really just went stream-of-consciousness with it. I appreciate the kind words.

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Rocky's Thoughts's avatar

Very moody and dramatic. Love the imagery

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JLG Noga's avatar

Thank you so much : )

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Kiff Joshua's avatar

Such intriguing flow, wow

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