That was terrifying! As always great at the slow-burn, and the experimental style here really helps with how the story disorients the reader. Deeply deeply unsettling - and topical too!
What a wild fucking ride holy shit. Absolutely a banger and told through mostly dialogue and text?? I could fill in the terror myself through your use of sounds too. Trippy, gritty, and super fucking dope
Yeaahh! that was my idea, to see how much of a story i could paint using only these very specific tools and methods. as i said in another note, it's very much a story told in negative space, both thematically and structurally. Glad it resonated with you! It's standalone but also has little nuggets i'll be exploring in future stories which is super exciting for me
This is very impressive. Very experimental. I didn’t even know Joe to start with such a piece. You master to channel the chaos. The story is beyond excellent.
this is so haunting! incredibly creative too. bravo!
Thanks man! Appreciate the kind words especially from you 🫡
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The form is very creative, it's gripping and unique, congratulations!
Thanks for the read Lazare!
That was terrifying! As always great at the slow-burn, and the experimental style here really helps with how the story disorients the reader. Deeply deeply unsettling - and topical too!
Really good man. Incredible imagery from what’s essentially a script format. Very cool.
thanks man! that’s what i was aiming at with this one, seeing how much of a story could i wring out from that
Holy shit. My stomach dropped a few times. A masterpiece!
Thanks so much Greta ❤️❤️
This one was a bigger risk for me. But I’m glad you felt as if it paid off
Always take the risk!
What a wild fucking ride holy shit. Absolutely a banger and told through mostly dialogue and text?? I could fill in the terror myself through your use of sounds too. Trippy, gritty, and super fucking dope
Yeaahh! that was my idea, to see how much of a story i could paint using only these very specific tools and methods. as i said in another note, it's very much a story told in negative space, both thematically and structurally. Glad it resonated with you! It's standalone but also has little nuggets i'll be exploring in future stories which is super exciting for me
This is very impressive. Very experimental. I didn’t even know Joe to start with such a piece. You master to channel the chaos. The story is beyond excellent.