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troy adkins's avatar

a most pleasing appetizer, enchanting rhythm.

now on to the big guns.

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

The rhythm in this is great. It wriggles into a run that you can’t quite escape. I could see The Worm as many things but I think you really capture a grand feeling of desolation that surrounds our pinky exterior.

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JLG Noga's avatar

Damn this is one that really slipped under the radar. I appreciate you even reading it man! This one was definitely more about the feeling than about anything narratively concrete, but there’s a through line between here to everything I’ve ever written

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I definitely could feel it. Super well done. So your pieces are all connected then?

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JLG Noga's avatar

more so thematically than narratively. I contemplate a lot on the liminal space between freedom and fate. As Antara becomes more sprawling with every story though, I’m definitely going to start tying in some threads from the other stories. I’ve also got other series and story ideas that are both related and unrelated. It’s a “we’ll see how it goes” kinda thing atm

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Dope as hell. Excited to read more

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